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The Mist

By Vyoman Jain (11G) & Prarthana Vasanth (12K)
 

Light was streaming in through the window. Luke opened his eyes to be
greeted by the same view he saw every day: his desktop, his room and the oxygen
tanks. He sluggishly got out of bed, still sore from the previous day’s events. After
freshening up, he had a nutritious breakfast comprising freeze-dried fruits and the
best coffee within a million miles of him. He walked to his workstation and started
on repairs. Beside him was a porthole, which gave him a glimpse of the world or
more accurately, the galaxy outside.

Luke was the chief maintenance officer aboard the UNSF Surveyor – first of
the many ships travelling to different worlds throughout the Milky Way Galaxy.
They had set out a decade earlier to explore Earth’s galactic neighbourhood for life.
Luke looked just twenty years old; however, he was just over 120 years old – a
welcome side effect of faster-than-light travel.

The galaxy would always be a magnificent view that would’ve been hard for
someone to comprehend but for Luke, he was accustomed to it. He checked to see if there were any problems with the airlocks first. This would’ve been a routine check; however, this time it was different. Luke was still hazy in the head; the previous events were a crystalized memory, but it was his nebulous thinking that didn’t help very well with making sense of the moment. He continued examining the
thermostat, controls and the communication systems.






He jumped at the sound of Reid entering the workstation. His face was
drained, making him look like he hadn’t slept for a second the previous night.

“You need to fix your routine; you look like you had a makeover done by a
raccoon” was an unusual way to greet someone but Luke was pretty reciprocal in
his sense of banter.

“Don’t small talk me right now for goodness sake, I’ve been paranoid” he
replied to Luke, “Besides, why are you here right now? I tried waking you up an
hour ago to check the recordings with me.” Reid asked.

Luke ignored his question and continued scrutinizing everything in his
workstation until Reid physically and abruptly broke him away from the controls.
Luke yowled at the pull, “Give me a break, I know you are in shock from yesterday,
I am too. I just need to work some things out and it’s easier when I’m calm.” he
retorted. Reid struggled as he tried to sit across Luke, his lack of balance was the
result of the blow he had taken to his core. His hair was messy unlike every other
time, when it was crisply slicked back and his arm was still wrapped in a sling.

“How on Seyfert did we end up on the inside of the co-rotation radius?” Reid
asked, out of breath.

“Trust me, if I had any answers with me, we wouldn’t have been here in the
first place.” Luke mechanically answered.


Luke continued to analyse the data appearing on his workstation while Reid,
who had finally settled down next to Luke, closed his eyes for some much-awaited
relaxation. Luke found the damaged areas of their side of the ship and set off to
repair them while Reid caught some z’s. His mind was still trying to make sense of
the previous day’s events as he worked on the airlock. He regretted the decision to
check that anomaly yesterday. He had not been able to switch off the light the
previous night as the darkness reminded him of that same feeling of utter despair
and hopelessness, he had felt the day during the previous day’s encounter.

Once he had finally finished the repairs, he returned to his workstation, to
find Reid calmly asleep. While scrolling through the system notifications, he noticed
something which drained the colour from his face. His mind started to race as he
realised what was happening. He promptly woke up Reid and gravely said, “It’s
happening again.”

Reid turned pale. He shuddered at the thought of facing it again and
immediately said, “I am not going to face that again. I can’t...”

Luke responded by saying, “Reid, we don’t know what it is. We cannot risk
leaving it unchecked. We would not only be putting ourselves at risk but also all the
people in cryosleep. We must check it out and this time we will be prepared.” Reid
hesitantly agreed and Luke quickly gathered the halogen lamps, oxygen flares and
two exosuit housing units. They set out to the location of the anomaly in the outer
ring corridor. Here they found themselves facing it again, the object of their troubles
and fears – the ominous fog.

It was back. The thick, pure black, cloud-like mist was swirling in the middle
of the corridor, just like the previous time. It lashed out thick arm-like projections.
The same type that had injured Reid last time. The two had made the mistake of
entering the mist last time where they immediately felt cold and alone. Their lights
and oxygen had malfunctioned and suddenly, it seemed like their happiness was
being sucked out of them, leaving them shrouded in complete darkness and filling
them with despair. They lost consciousness after that and then awoke on the other
side of the craft, inside the co-rotation radius. Presently, they were cautiously
analysing the mist when it suddenly expanded, filling the entire room and
enveloping them completely.

Luke reached for two jackets at the back of his station immediately, he fixed
the shell onto his torso and shimmied his arms and legs in. The jackets were a
mechanism built to work the same way as the human body that wears them. Having
a potential force of 370 kilograms, a jacket could easily crush a rifle barrel. With
use of efficient technology, they were able to make the mass lacklustre when
required for portability. Just like the human body has a contraption to keep power
exertion in balance, in order to prevent accidents from such huge force when
activated, the jackets have an auto balancer to limit the force exerted on the body
inside it. These had almost no use in space travel, they were solely built for
bloodshed. The jackets were inventions that were constructed during a certain
momentous event that occurred about two centuries ago, when the Earth had an
‘unearthly’ encounter with a legion that was quite hostile. This gave birth to the
need for exploring space and hence came the emergence of a more diversified UNSF.

While trying to fight the mist that kept expanding, Luke somehow succeeded
in fitting his jacket down onto his torso and turned on the auto balancer. After the
previous run against the mist, Luke had figured that the jackets would be helpful
while handling a situation this hazardous. The problem now was to get the jacket
onto Reid. The condition of his body was at odds with withstanding the pressure of
the mist.

“Reid, listen.” Luke motioned at him, “I will need you to get into this jacket.”
Reid didn’t say a word, he only nodded at Luke and gestured at him for help. The
mist kept getting thicker, almost blinding their vision. Luke managed to fasten the
shell but before he could get Reid’s broken arm into the sleeve, the mist was too
thick for Luke to see.

“Luke, the auto balancer!” Reid was wailing in pain by now.

“Reid, I can’t turn it on if the whole suit is not on.” Luke’s trembling hands
weren’t helping the situation. There were those thin arm-like projections in the mist
again. They were not as big as before but enough to exert pressure that could cause damage. The weight of the jacket was making it worse without the auto balancer. When your lungs are crushed, you drown, not in water, but in air. Gasp as
hard as you want, but the oxygen will not be able to get into your bloodstream with
crushed lungs. Everyone else around would be able to do it involuntarily, without
a second thought while you drown alone in an ocean of air. Reid for a fact, hadn’t
made that up; he had been submerged, engulfed and saturated. The pressure of the .35 tonne jacket was all exerted on his upper body. The scene was eerily familiar to him as he felt a renewed sense of terror. Luke’s blood ran cold as he realised what was happening. Every bone in his body was petrified. He couldn’t comprehend that this was happening right now.

Before Luke could process Reid’s passing, there was a colossal explosion that
set the alarms off. Although Luke couldn’t see it properly, he felt it come from the
left of the spacecraft, where the cryosleep containment zone resided. He hurried
there, still shaky from what had just happened. The Containment Zone had less
mist, enabling him to see and analyse the explosion. The cover had blown up till
the protective RCC layer, but fortunately, the cryosleep containers had survived the
explosion untouched.

He rushed into the Containment Zone and performed a quick visual
inspection of the area. Much to his relief, there were no holes in the walls and no
alarms were blaring. He quickly made his way back to the area where the mist had
been. It had vanished without a trace immediately after the explosion. One thought
kept nagging Luke, on his way back, “If only I had been able to activate the suit,
Reid would not have...”. He was still unable to comprehend Reid’s untimely death
but upon reaching the area, his disbelief turned into shock. Reid’s body had
vanished. There was no sign of it. The mystery deepened. Luke was unable to make any sense of this development; he was overpowered with emotions. He was
overwhelmed with the sudden turn of events and broke down. Crying his lungs out,
he dropped to his knees and curled up on the floor.

The past two days’ events had pushed him to the ends of his sanity. His best
friend, who was also the only person he could talk to, was killed by a mysterious
and malevolent space mist. Now, he was totally and utterly alone. The thought of
travelling solo through space with the unexplained deadly mist lurking somewhere
was terrifying him. These fears and the emotional trauma he had been through led
to a panic attack and he passed out on the floor.

Luke woke up to the sound of a robotic voice blaring through the ship’s public
announcement system. He was feeling a bit better, but his mind was still wracked
with nervousness and unknown fear. He listened closely to the announcement and
was alerted to the fact that the ship had reduced its speed due to an object in its
path. Luke reached the nearest control panel and found that the ship was headed
towards a transit space station. He realised that the people on the station would
perhaps be able to make sense of the phenomena he had been experiencing and so he decided to dock.

He entered the station to be greeted by ominous silence. There was no
operator contacting him through the radio and none of the hustle bustle of a usual
transit point. He headed straight to the crew quarters to find out what had
happened and try to contact the UNSF. Upon reaching there, his befuddlement
grew manifold as the entire station seemed to be abandoned. None of the
communication facilities were working either. Luke decided to look through the
security footage and was horrified to realise that the same mist had ravaged this
station as well three days prior – just before it had first appeared on the UNSF
Surveyor. The mist had killed everyone on board the station however, just like Reid,
none of their corpses were to be found.

Luke was starting to panic once again. He turned and rushed back to the
Surveyor to undock from the station. Upon reaching the docking platform, he saw
a shadow move in the corridor. The shadow was getting larger and larger in front
of him and Luke was dreading that this was another mist attack. He turned
around, ready to flee at the sight of the mist, but was stunned to find Reid standing
behind him.

Luke was perplexed at the sight of Reid. Every detail of the circumstance was
disconcerting and the questions running through Luke’s head made him giddy.
Nothing could explain the smoke or the relocating to an entirely different radius.
Nothing could explain Reid either. “Reid, how are you still alive?” Luke barely
managed to get the words out of his mouth.

Reid's voice remained unvaried when he replied, “That’s an answer for
another day.” He stood erect like his body was unharmed and balanced as if his
core was only wounded more than 7 years ago and his arm seemed mended. The
mist around them started to change colour, there were flares of electric red from the
thick grey smoke. He looked around, visually analysing it. Luke had a flashback.

Stellar smoke.

When he looked back, Reid was gone. He wanted to take time to think this
through and make everything make sense, but at least some parts of it was
coming together. Reid was right, he was an answer for another day. Right now,
Luke had to figure out what was going on and find a solution to keep the people in
the cryosleep safe. He made a hurried beeline to the inside of the station. Most of it
was disintegrated and broken down. He wondered how there was a space station
in the inner part of the co-rotation radius since the space stations were always
placed on a further radius or somewhere close to the brink to avoid damage from
gravitational fields. He scurried to the admin room of the station. It was the only
room that could have possibly survived the destruction. The door was sealed tight,
but the jacket could provide enough force to propel the door open.

When he entered, he immediately reached for the monitor. Just his luck, it
was still working. He waited for what seemed like hours for it to finish its
reading. On the screen, was a reading made by waves that scanned the
surroundings. The colours on the screen were forming shapes that had not been
witnessed till now, it represented a replication fork. He then looked at the gas
analytics. The hydrogen levels were extremely high, along with a concentration of
polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons. He was right, the combustion in the smoke was
from stellar particles.

Suddenly, everything made sense. Luke theorised that the fork formation
was two galaxies, What he was seeing was a collision. While it was happening, the
hydrogen compression would have triggered multiple gravitational forces throwing
them to the other side of the co-rotational radius. The other galaxy was most
probably Messier 82, which had a superfluity of stellar smoke. The mixing of that
with the compressed hydrogen had made something that they had never recognised, something that hadn’t been inferred before.

This was an occurrence that was almost impossible to circumvent. Luke
could just give up; he was on his ‘last leg’, but he had to do something about the
people in the cryosleep. He couldn't just let them be unfortunate collateral damage
for the mess that could have been avoided if only there was more vigilance. Right
now, he had to figure a way to keep them safe and get them out of here.

Luke navigated his way back to the Surveyor’s bridge where he could take
manual control of the ship and undock from the station. He switched on the ship’s
infrared scanners which gave him a comprehensive view of the stellar smoke in the
ship’s trajectory on the holographic display. He went through the navigation logs
and found that the ‘mist attacks’ coincided with the ship passing through a huge
patch of stellar smoke. He also found that the space station had been situated in a
particularly big hotspot of stellar smoke which had subsided a few hours ago. This
led him to theorise that all these attacks had in fact been large concentrations of
stellar smoke permeating throughout the ship and causing hallucinations or brief
lapses in memory.

Armed with this knowledge, Luke looked through the infrared map of the
area surrounding the ship. He found areas where the smoke was in low
concentrations, these places could be ideal for the ship to jump to faster-than-light
speeds and pull the ship and its passengers out of harm’s way. The closest such
area was a mere ten minutes away. Luke immediately plotted a course and set off.
There was only one thing that was still bothering Luke with his hypothesis, the
location of Reid’s body. The body had disappeared from the outer ring corridor
where the mist or the smoke had collected. Luke left the bridge and headed to the
corridor to see if the idea that was formulating in his brain was correct.

The first attack and the corridor attack had only one common access point
and that was the airlock he had tried to repair after the first attack. He reached the
airlock and found his theory to be true. The smoke had entered the ship through the
faulty airlock and exited the same way as well. After the second attack, the smoke
had dragged Reid back to the airlock due to its pressure while Luke had been
checking the cryosleep chambers. Luke took Reid and temporarily interned his body in a cryosleep pod till they would reach their destination planet.

After doing this, he headed back to the bridge and found that they were
almost at the point where they could escape from. He quickly rescanned the area
and found that the smoke was collecting around the ship once again. He had to
leave as soon as possible before the smoke seeped through the airlock again. He sped up the ship and brought it to the area and quickly jumped to the faster-than-light speed, reaching their destination a decade later where Reid was respectfully buried, and Luke’s voyage became a tale of caution taught to every new UNSF space cadet.

The End.

Comments

  1. This ecan very well be developed into a book!
    Just pay attention to small aspects similar to using phrases like "Reid caught some z’s." Not sure if this fit into the quality of the writing.

    Also would revisit the use of RCC as a material in space, when you do develop your book :)

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